Show case

We were given the opportunity to showcase our work and what we had done so far. We put together a rough of our final sequence.



We had good feedback from the rest of the people in our class. This was when re lrealised that we would need to work extreamly hard to get a good final outcome form this.
Good points

• Good and clear lighting
• Good climax at the end
• Good and clever credits used on props

Points of improvement

• Music didn't go properly
• Too many straight cuts
• Some pointless shots
• Couldnt see girl in window at end
• unclear storyline at points
• Timing of fast cuts is unusual
• Bad Title
• Build up girls character

The feedback has now given our group a chance to work on making our sequence as best as we can make it. We have taken all of the points on board.